Understanding the Funnel-Approach in Introductions

The Organization of Introductions

Writing an Introduction

The introduction should start by presenting a b – r – o – a - d view of your topic, and then it will narrow down gradually to the thesis statement, or main argument/purpose of the paper.

You must capture the readers’ interest in the first paragraph, and show them what the paper will be about, ending with your thesis statement [and possibly a thesis with essay map]. 

[If you do not construct your introduction wisely, you will have lost the audience before you ever get a chance to prove the first point of your argument.]

A good introduction stays on topic and prepares the reader for the rest of the paper.

[If you provide source material in any other section—of the introduction—other than in the hook, you are not meeting the requirements for an introduction.  The purpose of an introduction is not to prove your argument.  The purpose of an introduction is to assert/present your argument.  The body-paragraphs are where you will ‘prove’ your argument.  While you can use a captivating quote as the hook of your introduction paragraph, no other source usage should appear in this section of your essay.]

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