Illustrations in All
Types of Writing
The samples and general information
contained in the boxes below are taken from the OWL Purdue website.
See source citations associated with
each reference within the green boxes.
When citing an image source, you want to be sure to include all necessary source information to meet MLA’s standards. The writer’s goal is to “represent the original source information faithfully and avoid unethical practices of false representation or manipulation” (“MLA Formatting and Style Guide”).
Figure Citations
When you are using an illustration (picture, infographic, image, or a visual of any type) that is not a graph or table, it is considered a ‘figure’. When citing a ‘figure’ in your writing, it takes a bit more work than just embedding the image into the body paragraph and placing the full source citation into the Works Cited page.
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Keck, Joshua M. Paiz, Michelle Campbell, Rodrigo RodrÃguez-Fuentes, Daniel P.
Kenzie, Susan Wegener, Maryam Ghafoor, Purdue OWL Staff.
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Illustrations
appear directly embedded in the document… Each illustration must include a label,
a number, a caption and/or source
information.
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Inserting Proper Documentation
You will need to include the direct usage (as an in text citation
reference) and mention of the ‘figure’ within the body paragraph where it can
be used to prove a point in your writing, and then you must also include a
special citation directly under the ‘figure’ to give credit as well.
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Keck, Joshua M. Paiz, Michelle Campbell, Rodrigo RodrÃguez-Fuentes, Daniel P.
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Figures
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Figures
Example
In-text reference:
Some readers found Harry’s final battle with Voldemort a
disappointment, and recently, the podcast, MuggleCast debated
the subject (see fig. 2).
[The picture of Harry and Voldemort battling would appear
somewhere near this statement in the body paragraph of the essay.]
Figure
caption (below an embedded podcast file [or a posting of the
image] for a document to be viewed electronically):
Fig. 2. Harry Potter and Voldemort final battle debate from
Andrew Sims et al.;“Show
166”; MuggleCast; MuggleNet.com, 19 Dec.
2008, www.mugglenet.com/2015/11/the-
snape-debate-rowling-speaks-out.
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Works Cited Page Citations
For the Discussion Question where we
examine the texting ad and infographics,
you need to properly cite each image you use to answer the discussion
question. As a reminder—no matter if you are writing an email, blog
posting, memo, or an essay, you must document items (resources) that are
used in the writing: any type of writing.
For the Prentice Hall Reference
Guide (PHRG) image you chose to write about in the classroom, you
will need to be sure to properly cite the image in your analysis, and you will
also need a Works Cited section at the end of the writing.
The four PHRG images on
pages 78-79 pose a unique citation challenge because they do not include a
source name, origin, title, date, or figure number. We do know what
text they come from, and so we would take our ‘title’ and place it in front of
the full source citation, and place the page number at the very end—to meet the
source requirements for an image.
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Required Resources for
Discussion Question 2—adjust this source citation by adding in the image
points (location marker as the name and the page number)
Harris, Muriel, and
Jennifer Kunka. Prentice Hall Reference Guide. Custom 9th ed.
Upper Saddle
River: Prentice Hall, 2015.
Muller, Gilbert H., and
Harvey S. Wiener. To the Point: Reading and Writing Short Arguments.
Custom ed. Boston: Pearson, 2016.
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Since the goal of all documentation is to give the reading audience enough
information about the source so that they can locate the source on their own if
desired (which is why I require full URL—website addresses—when using sources
from the Internet), we must work within our limitations for those four PHRG images.
Image Citation Placement
The 2 sections below will let you know
exactly how to cite and where to cite images used in your Discussion Board
posts and in your Essays.
1. In the body of your thread and reply:
In the body of your discussion board posts, you may refer to the image you are writing about by its location in the textbook:
*The image on p. 78
*The top image on p. 79
*The middle image on p. 79
*The bottom image on p. 79
1. In the body of your thread and reply:
In the body of your discussion board posts, you may refer to the image you are writing about by its location in the textbook:
*The image on p. 78
*The top image on p. 79
*The middle image on p. 79
*The bottom image on p. 79
An example of the full source citation
for the bottom image on page 79 would be:
Incorporating Source Information in 3
Places
Discussion
Board Usage VS Essay Writing
Discussion
Board Usage
If the signal phrases
in your sentences from the very beginning of your discussion board posts make
it clear which image you are writing about, you will not need to include in-text citations for the image in the post.
Since I will know enough information from that signal phrase and
your full source citation (at the very end of your post), you will not need to
add in the extra in-text citation as you would in an essay.
- When you have properly identified which visual you are using, and
- You have provided the correct full source citation information at the end of the post—in a Works Cited section—to let me know that you know how to properly cite the ‘figure’--then
- You will be all set.
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Please
keep in mind that THIS
information for Discussion Board Usage of Images in THIS section of the Figures and Charts page is dealing
with any discussion question image usage that may be assigned for our class.
Below you will find the full directions for incorporating and citing
images in an essay.
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Essay
Writing
When using an image in
an essay—or other piece of formal writing—you will need to be as clear and
specific as possible, thus requiring the source information in three places:
1.
Within
the sentence
·
where the source is used
or discussed—as an in-text
citation. See the
in-text citation example above, highlighted
in green.
2.
Directly
under—or near—the ‘figure’
·
to provide proper source identification and the
captioning necessary.
See the captioning example above, highlighted
in blue.
3.
At the
end of the paper—or whatever type of
writing it may be—in a Works Cited section.
·
See the information above for
your Works cited sample for a ‘figure” and the detail information for a full
source citation below, highlighted
in pink.
2. At the end of your post:
You will need to include a Works Cited (MLA) at the end of your writing—or discussion post.
You will need to include a Works Cited (MLA) at the end of your writing—or discussion post.
- Your entry for the PHRG image can begin with the same title you used in the body of your post. For example: “Image on page 78” or “Bottom image on page 79.”
- However, please remember that in your source citation listing, you must include the FULL bibliographic details, not just the title of something or the webpage URL. Therefore, once you write out the title that you used in the body of your post, you need to follow that title with full bibliographic details about the Prentice Hall Reference Guide: book title, editors’ names, edition number, publisher, publication year, and so on.
Since
Essay 2 will also involve citing an image, look over the specific documentation
style guidelines in the textbook for our class, and/or you can go to the
blogsite that you were invited to for our class earlier in the semester for
more information on source usage and formatting in MLA style (www.LibertyENGL101.blogspot.com (Links to an external
site.)).
Thanks for your careful attention to documenting your sources as fully as possible. Your hard work will be worth it!
Thanks for your careful attention to documenting your sources as fully as possible. Your hard work will be worth it!
Figures
and Charts by The Writing Center at UNC-Chapel Hill
Learn
About Figure and Chart Usage
WHAT THIS HANDOUT IS ABOUT
This
handout will describe how to use figures and tables to present complicated
information in a way that is accessible and understandable to your reader.
DO I NEED A FIGURE/TABLE?
When
planning your writing, it is important to consider the best way to communicate
information to your audience, especially if you plan to use data in the form of numbers, words, or images that
will help you construct and support your argument. Generally speaking,
data summaries may take the form of text, tables or figures. Most writers are
familiar with textual data summaries and this is often the best way to
communicate simple results. A good rule of thumb is to see if you can
present your results clearly in a sentence or two. If so, a table or
figure is probably unnecessary. If your data are too numerous or
complicated to be described adequately in this amount of space, figures and
tables can be effective ways of conveying lots of information without cluttering
up your text. Additionally, they serve as quick references for your reader
and can reveal trends, patterns, or relationships that might otherwise be
difficult to grasp.
SO WHAT’S THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A TABLE AND A
FIGURE ANYWAY?
Tables present
lists of numbers or text in columns and can be used to synthesize existing
literature, to explain variables, or to present the wording of survey
questions. They are also used to make a paper or article more readable by
removing numeric or listed data from the text. Tables are typically used
to present raw data, not when you want to show a relationship between
variables.
Figures are
visual presentations of results. They come in the form of graphs, charts,
drawings, photos, or maps. Figures provide visual impact and can
effectively communicate your primary finding. Traditionally, they are used
to display trends and patterns of relationship, but they can also be used to
communicate processes or display complicated data simply. Figures should
not duplicate the same information found in tables and vice versa.
USING TABLES
Tables
are easily constructed using your word processor’s table function or a spread
sheet program such as Excel. Elements of a table include the Legend or Title, Column Titles, and the Table Body (quantitative
or qualitative data). They may also include subheadings and
footnotes. Remember that it is just as important to think about the
organization of tables as it is to think about the organization of
paragraphs. A well-organized table allows readers to grasp the meaning of
the data presented with ease, while a disorganized one will leave the reader
confused about the data itself, or the significance of the data.
Title: Tables
are headed by a number followed by a clear, descriptive title or caption. Conventions
regarding title length and content vary by discipline. In the hard
sciences, a lengthy explanation of table contents may be acceptable. In
other disciplines, titles should be descriptive but short, and any explanation
or interpretation of data should take place in the text. Be sure to look
up examples from published papers within your discipline that you can use as a
model. It may also help to think of the title as the “topic sentence” of
the table—it tells the reader what the table is about and how it’s
organized. Tables are read from the top down, so titles go above the body
of the table and are left-justified.
Column
titles: The goal of column headings is to simplify and clarify the
table, allowing the reader to understand the components of the table
quickly. Therefore, column titles should be brief and descriptive and
should include units of analysis.
Table
body: This is where your data are located, whether they are
numerical or textual. Again, organize your table in a way that helps the reader
understand the significance of the data. Be sure to think about what you
want your readers to compare, and put that information in the column (up and
down) rather than in the row (across). In other words, construct your
table so that like elements read down, not across. When using numerical data
with decimals, make sure that the decimal points line up. Whole numbers
should line up on the right.
OTHER TABLE ELEMENTS
Tables
should be labeled with a number preceding the table title; tables and figures
are labeled independently of one another. Tables should also have lines
demarcating different parts of the table (title, column headers, data, and
footnotes if present). Gridlines or boxes should not be included in printed
versions. Tables may or may not include other elements, such as
subheadings or footnotes.
QUICK REFERENCE FOR TABLES
Tables
should be:
·
Centered on the page.
·
Numbered in the order
they appear in the text.
·
Referenced in the
order they appear in the text.
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Labeled with the table
number and descriptive title above the
table.
·
Labeled with column
and/or row labels that describe the data, including units of measurement.
·
Set apart from the
text itself; text does not flow around the table.
Table 1. Physical characteristics of the
Doctor in the new series of Doctor Who
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Height
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Age (yrs.)
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Ninth Doctor
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6’0”
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41
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Tenth Doctor
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6’1”
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35
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Eleventh Doctor
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5’11”
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25
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Table 2. Physical characteristics of the
Doctor in the new series of Doctor Who
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Personal Appearance
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Wardrobe
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Ninth Doctor
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Close-cropped
hair
Blue eyes
Slightly stockier build
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Black
leather jacket
Dark coloured, v-necked shirts
Black combat boots
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Tenth Doctor
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Longer,
mussed-up hair
Brown eyes
Very thin build
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Beige
trench coat
Pin-striped suit and tie
Chuck Taylors
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Eleventh Doctor
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Longer,
side-swept hair
Green eyes
Slightly stockier build
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Brown
tweed jacket
Bow tie and suspenders
Black Boots
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USING
FIGURES
Figures can take many forms. They may be
graphs, diagrams, photos, drawings, or maps. Think deliberately about your
purpose and use common sense to choose the most effective figure for
communicating the main point. If you want your reader to understand spatial
relationships, a map or photograph may be the best choice. If you want to
illustrate proportions, experiment with a pie chart or bar graph. If you want
to illustrate the relationship between two variables, try a line graph or a
scatterplot (more on various types of graphs below). Although there are many
types of figures, like tables, they share some typical features: captions, the image itself,
and any necessary contextual information (which
will vary depending on the type of figure you use).
Figure captions: Figures should be labeled with a number
followed by a descriptive caption or title. Captions should be concise but
comprehensive. They should describe the data shown, draw attention to
important features contained within the figure, and may sometimes also include
interpretations of the data. Figures are typically read from the bottom
up, so captions go below the figure and are left-justified.
Image: The most important consideration for figures is
simplicity. Choose images the viewer can grasp and interpret clearly and
quickly. Consider size, resolution, color, and prominence of important
features. Figures should be large enough and of sufficient resolution for the
viewer to make out details without straining their eyes. Also consider the
format your paper will ultimately take. Journals typically publish figures
in black and white, so any information coded by color will be lost to the
reader. On the other hand, color might be a good choice for papers
published to the web or for PowerPoint presentations. In any case, use
figure elements like color, line, and pattern for effect, not for flash.
Additional Information: Figures should be labeled with a number
preceding the table title; tables and figures are numbered independently of one
another. Also be sure to include any additional contextual information your
viewer needs to understand the figure. For graphs, this may include
labels, a legend explaining symbols, and vertical or horizontal tick
marks. For maps, you’ll need to include a scale and north arrow. If
you’re unsure about contextual information, check out several types of figures
that are commonly used in your discipline.
QUICK
REFERENCE FOR FIGURES
Figures should be:
· Centered on the page.
· Labeled (under the figure) with the figure
number and appropriate descriptive title (“Figure” can be spelled out [“Figure
1.”] or abbreviated [“Fig. 1.”] as long as you are consistent).
· Numbered in the order they appear in the text.
· Referenced in the order they appear in the
text (i.e. Figure 1 is referenced in the text before Figure 2 and so forth).
· Set apart from the text; text should not flow
around figures.
Graphs: Every graph is a figure but not every figure
is a graph. Graphs are a particular set of figures that display
quantitative relationships between variables. Some of the most common
graphs include bar charts, frequency histograms, pie charts, scatter plots, and
line graphs, each of which displays trends or relationships within and among
datasets in a different way. You’ll need to carefully choose the best
graph for your data and the relationship that you want to show. More
details about some common graph types are provided below. Some good advice
regarding the construction of graphs is to keep it simple. Remember that
the main objective of your graph is communication. If your viewer is
unable to visually decode your graph, then you have failed to communicate the
information contained within it.
Pie Charts: Pie charts are used to show relative
proportions, specifically the relationship of a number of parts to the
whole. Use pie charts only when the parts of the pie are mutually
exclusive categories and the sum of parts adds up to a meaningful whole (100%
of something). Pie charts are good at showing “big picture” relationships
(i.e. some categories make up “a lot” or “a little” of the whole
thing). However, if you want your reader to discern fine distinctions
within your data, the pie chart is not for you. Humans are not very good
at making comparisons based on angles. We are much better at comparing
length, so try a bar chart as an alternative way to show relative
proportions. Additionally, pie charts with lots of little slices or slices
of very different sizes are difficult to read, so limit yours to 5-7
categories.
Figure 1. Elements in
Martian soil (Too many slices)
Figure
2. Leisure activities of Venusian teenagers (Slices do not add up to anything)
Bar Graphs: Bar graphs are also used to display
proportions. In particular, they are useful for showing the relationship
between independent and dependent variables, where the independent variables
are discrete (often nominal) categories. Some examples are occupation,
gender, and species. Bar graphs can be vertical or horizontal. In a
vertical bar graph the independent variable is shown on the x axis (left to
right) and the dependent variable on the y axis (up and down). In a
horizontal one, the dependent variable will be shown on the horizontal (x)
axis, the independent on the vertical (y) axis. The scale and origin of
the graph should be meaningful. If the dependent (numeric) variable has a
natural zero point, it is commonly used as a point of origin for the bar chart. However,
zero is not always the best choice. You should experiment with both origin and
scale to best show the relevant trends in your data without misleading the
viewer in terms of the strength or extent of those trends.
Example of a bar graph:
Figure 3. Genders of
spaceship crew members in popular television series
Frequency Histograms/distributions: Frequency histograms are a special type of bar
graph that show the relationship between independent and dependent variables,
where the independent variable is continuous, rather than discrete. This
means that each bar represents a range of values, rather than a single
observation. The dependent variables in a histogram are always numeric, but may
be absolute (counts) or relative (percentages). Frequency histograms are
good for describing populations—examples include the distribution of exam
scores for students in a class or the age distribution of the people living in
Chapel Hill. You can experiment with bar ranges (also known as “bins”) to
achieve the best level of detail, but each range or bin should be of uniform
width and clearly labeled.
XY scatter plots: Scatter plots are another way to illustrate
the relationship between two variables. In this case, data are displayed
as points in an x,y coordinate system, where each point represents
one observation along two axes of variation. Often, scatter plots are
used to illustrate correlation between two variables—as one variable increases,
the other increases (positive correlation) or decreases (negative
correlation). However, correlation does not necessarily imply that changes
in one variable cause changes in the other. For instance, a third,
unplotted variable may be causing both. In other words, scatter plots can be
used to graph one independent and one dependent variable, or they can be used
to plot two independent variables. In cases where one variable is dependent
on another (for example, height depends partly on age), plot the independent
variable on the horizontal (x) axis, and the dependent variable on the vertical
(y) axis. In addition to correlation (a linear relationship), scatter plots can
be used to plot non-linear relationships between variables.
Example of a scatter plot:
Figure 4. The effect
of weather on UFO sightings
XY line graphs: Line graphs are similar to scatter plots in
that they display data along two axes of variation. Line graphs, however,
plot a series of related values that depict a change in one variable as a
function of another, for example, world population (dependent) over time
(independent). Individual data points are joined by a line, drawing the viewer’s
attention to local change between adjacent points, as well as to larger trends
in the data. Line graphs are similar to bar graphs, but are better at
showing the rate of change between two points. Line graphs can also be used to
compare multiple dependent variables by plotting multiple lines on the same
graph.
Example of an XY line graph:
Figure 5. Age of the
actor of each Doctor Who regeneration (1-11)
GENERAL
TIPS FOR GRAPHS
Strive for simplicity. Your data will be complex. Don’t be
tempted to convey the complexity of your data in graphical form. Your job
(and the job of your graph) is to communicate the most important thing about
the data. Think of graphs like you think of paragraphs—if you have several
important things to say about your data, make several graphs, each of which
highlights one important point you want to make.
Strive for clarity. Make sure that your data are portrayed
in a way that is visually clear. Make sure that you have explained the
elements of the graph clearly. Consider your audience. Will your
reader be familiar with the type of figure you are using (such as a
boxplot)? If not, or if you’re not sure, you may need to explain boxplot
conventions in the text. Avoid “chartjunk.” Superfluous elements just
make graphs visually confusing. Your reader does not want to spend 15
minutes figuring out the point of your graph.
Strive for accuracy. Carefully check your graph for
errors. Even a simple graphical error can change the meaning and
interpretation of the data. Use graphs responsibly. Don’t manipulate
the data so that it looks like it’s saying something it’s not—savvy viewers
will see through this ruse, and you will come off as incompetent at best and
dishonest at worst.
HOW
SHOULD TABLES AND FIGURES INTERACT WITH TEXT?
Placement of figures and tables within the
text is discipline-specific. In manuscripts (such as lab reports and
drafts) it is conventional to put tables and figures on separate pages from the
text, as near as possible to the place where you first refer to it. You
can also put all the figures and tables at the end of the paper to avoid
breaking up the text. Figures and tables may also be embedded in the text,
as long as the text itself isn’t broken up into small chunks. Complex raw
data is conventionally presented in an appendix. Be sure to check on
conventions for the placement of figures and tables in your discipline.
You can use text to guide the reader in
interpreting the information included in a figure, table, or graph—tell the
reader what the figure or table conveys and why it was important to include it.
When referring to tables and graphs from
within the text, you can use:
· Clauses beginning with “as”: “As shown in Table 1, …”
· Passive voice: “Results are shown in Table
1.”
· Active voice (if appropriate for your
discipline): “Table 1 shows that …”
· Parentheses: “Each
sample tested positive for three nutrients (Table 1).”
WORKS
CONSULTED
Almost Everything You Wanted to Know about
Making Tables and Figures
http://abacus.bates.edu/~ganderso/biology/resources/writing/HTWtablefigs.html
http://abacus.bates.edu/~ganderso/biology/resources/writing/HTWtablefigs.html
Twelve Steps to Developing Effective Tables
and Figures San Francisco Edit
http://www.sfedit.net/tabfig.pdf
http://www.sfedit.net/tabfig.pdf
Beam’s Crash Course in Tables, Figures, and
Appendices
http://feh.eng.ohio-state.edu/labs/figures,%20tables,%20appendices.doc
http://feh.eng.ohio-state.edu/labs/figures,%20tables,%20appendices.doc
Using Figures, Tables, and Graphs
http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/writing/science/process/2.1.xml
http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/writing/science/process/2.1.xml
The Elements of Graph Data by William S. Cleveland
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